User:Benjamsredcob/Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on neurological, psychological and other mental health outcomes/Jqp5962 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Benjamsredcob


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Benjamsredcob/Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_neurological%2C_psychological_and_other_mental_health_outcomes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Benjamsredcob/Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_neurological%2C_psychological_and_other_mental_health_outcomes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked the topic chosen. This is a very relevant topic in today's world, and the information on the topic can help people in various ways. This wikipedia page has a very good lead. It provides a strong basis for what information will come and it does a great job bringing up the main points of the topic. All information is clearly referenced and the references chosen help support the topic of this wikipedia page. The author does a great job in making sure that the information comes from a neutral point of view. He does this by ensuring that the information is strictly from his sources and opinions are not intermixed with facts. Although the lead is great, the rest of the wikipedia page is missing. The article body has not yet been written. At the rate of this article, I am sure it will be written very well. Overall, so far this wikipedia page is on the right track. I believe that it will definitely help contribute to the research already on the topic.

Response: Thank you for evaluating my article. I know that it's not much yet, but I will continue to put in info should I have more time to complete the page. This is a topic that I'd want ti expand upon more.