User:Bennett Sutter/John of Seville/19djky23$ Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bennett Sutter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bennett Sutter/John of Seville - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * John of Seville - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The added content helps to round out the article. The added information relating to Secretum Secretorum and his use of different perspectives in writing style is interesting, if it fits with your plans for the article, I might recommend expounding on those topics further if the information is available. Is it known why he translated to Latin under the name John of Seville but to Spanish under the name Avendehut; if so, that might make a good area for further additions. The references list is quite impressive and the writing unbiased.