User:Benrod44/sandbox

Why and How I will improve the article: I am going to add detail to the Kristallnacht section. the article mentions Kristallnacht and how after it there was more enforcement of laws, but it doesn't go into much detail about what Kristallnacht actually was. I am not going to focus on Kristallnacht too much though because that is not the main idea of the page. I think the article does a good job at explaining the Nuremberg Laws, but it doesn't talk about any other laws specifically. I am still going to add a little into the Nuremberg Laws section. Also, I am going to add another section or two about different laws or anti-jewish movements that were put into society. I am going to also add a general timeline when various laws were implemented.

Sources:
 * 1) "Remembering Kristallnacht." The Jerusalem Report Dec 08 2008: 27. ProQuest.Web. 6 Nov. 2016
 * 2) Doescher, Hans J. "Kristallnacht 1938." Shofar 29.3 (2011): 131-2. ProQuest.Web. 6 Nov. 2016.
 * 3) United States Holocaust Memorial Museum. “Anti-Jewish Legislation In Prewar Germany” Holocaust Encyclopedia. https://www.ushmm.org/wlc/en/article.php?ModuleId=10005681. 6 Nov, 2016.
 * 4) United States Holocaust Memorial Museum. “Examples Of Antisemitic Legislation, 1933-1930.” Holocaust Encyclopedia. https://www.ushmm.org/wlc/en/article.php?ModuleId=10007459. 6 Nov, 2016.
 * 5) Wistrich, Robert S. "Helping Hitler." Commentary 07 1996: 27. ProQuest. Web. 6 Nov. 2016
 * 6) King,Henry T.,,Jr. "THE LEGACY OF NUREMBERG." Case Western Reserve Journal of International Law 34.3 (2002): 335-56. ProQuest. Web. 7 Nov. 2016.

'''—You need better quality sources. Most of these are not primarily about anti-Jewish legislation. Use the library catalog. Prof. Bitzan Amos26 (talk) 18:30, 28 October 2016 (UTC)'''

Link to Article: Anti-Jewish legislation in prewar Nazi Germany

Outline
Kristallnacht Section: Timeline of legislations and movements: (I am going to add more detail when I actually add the changes, but I am just getting the changes down because this is an outline). Adding this at the bottom of the page.
 * before the first sentence I am going to add information about Kristallnacht.
 * attacks on synagogues, jewish owned businesses, other jewish establishments, and jewish citizens in general
 * foreshadowed Holocaust
 * 100 killed, thousands arrested and sent to concentration camps
 * start of organized nazi attacks
 * No clear instructions on how to execute violence
 * caused destroying jewish property and humiliating/ inhumane treatment
 * Add before last sentence in Kristallnacht Section:
 * Kristallnacht and the events following it showed the Nazi regime can count on nation wide support of Antisemitism from the general public
 * delete part about Austria in last sentence --> because the page is about Germany

-more than 400 laws/ decrees/ other types of regulations from 1933-1939

- restricted all aspects of live- public and private

- national laws (affected all jews) and state, region, city laws that affected those communities

- Almost all people involved in the support of Anti-Jewish legislation in some way

1933: 1935: 1936: 1937: 1938: 1939:
 * jewish doctors suspended from Berlin's charity services - march 31
 * April 7- law for restoration of professional civil service - remove jews from government service
 * jews forbid of jews to the bar- test to be lawyer
 * April 25- limit on jews in public schools
 * July 14- De-naturalization law: takes away citizenship of jews
 * Oct 4- jews banded from editorial posts
 * May 21- jews banded from army
 * Sept 15- Nuremberg laws announced
 * Jan 11- Executive order on the Reich Tax Law forbids jews to be tax consultants
 * April 3- Reich Veterinarians Law expels jews from veterinary professions
 * Oct 15- Reich Ministry of Education bans jews from teaching in public schools
 * April 9- in Berlin, no jews in public schools
 * Jan 5- Law on Alternation of Family and Personal N ames- can't change names
 * Feb 5- jews can't be auctioneers
 * April 18- The Gun Law- excludes jewish gun merchants
 * April 22- Jewish owned businesses can't change names
 * July 11- Jews banned from health spas
 * August 17- Law requires women to adopt name "Sara" and men "Israel"
 * Oct 5- The Reich Interior Ministry invalidates all German passports owned by jews
 * jews had to get a J stamped on their passport to make it valid
 * Nov 12- all jewish businesses closed --> exclude jews from economic life
 * Nov 15- No jews in public schools across country
 * Nov 28- Restriction on freedom of movement of jews
 * Nov 29- Jews can't keep carrier pigeons
 * Dec 14- an executive order on the Organization of National Work cancels all state contracts held with jewish-owned businesses
 * Dec 21- Jews banded from being midwives
 * Aug 1- President of the German lottery forbids sale of lottery tickets to jews

Law for the restoration of the professional civil service (adding before Kristallnacht section)

 * limiting participation of jews in German personal life
 * Jews and other none aryans can't serve government positions such has teachers, professors, and judges
 * 1st aryan paragraph
 * exclude jews from organizations, professions, and other aspects of public life.
 * lead to laws that restricted jewish students in schools and laws restricting jewish lawyers, notaries, doctors, and tax consultants
 * jewish lawyers and notaries could not work on legal matters
 * Jewish doctors could not work with non jewish patients
 * Some local governments did not allow the Jews to slaughter animals
 * this prevented them from obeying jewish dietary laws

Nuremberg laws
Before second sentence in section:
 * excluded jews from having citizenship, marrying or having sex with German women
 * deprived jews of political rights- no voting rights, can not hold political office

Add to last paragraph of section about Aryanization
 * excluded jews from the economic sphere of Germany by not allowing them to earn money
 * Reduce Jewish-owned businesses in Germany by 2/3

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