User:Benthicben21/Frenulata/LeaKathleen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Benthicben21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Benthicben21/Frenulata?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the article so far. The first sentence is worded a bit strange and it's a little hard to read. I think it could be beneficial to briefly describe or add links to a lot of the traits you had in the last two sentence, or at least just mid trunk girdle and trophosome. You could also probably add an additional section where you compile the information about where it's found and how it get it's nutrients and call it ecology or something like that. Other than that I think it's a good article, and I hope my feedback helps. Good job!