User:Benw26/sandbox

The article I chose to review was an article about William Parker a former NFL player for the Washington Redskins and Pittsburgh Steelers. In the Article the author copied and pasted information from the same page and all the information is word for word straight from the website. The author of the article also did not use very good pictures for the information provided. Last the original author had multiple grammatical errors that can be easily fixed.

My name is Benjamin Williams I go to Indiana University of Pennsylvania and I am studying to be a high school history teacher.