User:Bergerod/Online community/Venturca Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bergerod


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Online community

Evaluate the drafted changes
Added good examples to support previous claims

Also fixed issue with article in clear and concise manner and added a relevant source

Good job adding information, seems it was already a highly developed article however, would be easier to add more info if article was shorter/smaller and lacking in areas.