User:Berriesblue/Appius Claudius Caecus/Sheepreplicant9402 Peer Review

General info

 * Reviewing: Berriesblue
 * Link to draft: User:Berriesblue/Appius Claudius Caecus

Lead
The lead provides a good overview and introduction of what is to follow in the article. In the section beginning with "He also made several obscure constitutional reforms..." I would include a bit about your added section describing his Methods of Legal Practice. I would also add a quick mention of his literary output, as you added a section on it.

Content
Content added is relevant to the topic and well organized. The additions you have made add to the overall flow of the article, as well as providing more information.

Tone and Balance
The content you have added seemed to be neutral and balance from my perspective. I could not locate a general bias toward one position or another.

Sources and References
I don't know which sources were added by you or previous editors, but all sources appear to be reputable and appropriate for the article. All links work.

Organization

 * I know this is just a draft, so I'm not going to go through the entire thing with regards to spelling and punctuation. There are just some obvious typos and misspellings throughout the draft. It's a good draft! I would simply encourage you to read it through entirely again before submitting your final. I'd be happy to edit again once you're done.
 * Adding more to the Legal Contributions section would be helpful/interesting to read.
 * In the Later Career section, adding more context to Caecus' dictatorship and his speech against Cineas (if possible) would be interesting
 * If possible, I would add more quotes from him. I think I would reinstall the family tree as well.

Images and Media
I'm assuming images were only removed for the purpose of drafting, so N/A.

Overall impressions/evaluation
Your additions make the article more complete and add to the article's base text. There are certain sections, like Legal Contributions and Notable Quotes that could use fleshing out, but there's still plenty of time to do that. Overall I think you've done a vey good job, just need to add a few things and do some proofreading. Good on you.