User:Berserkz/Beher (god)/Dr.pepperlvr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Beher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Beher (god)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Beher (god)

Evaluate the drafted changes
One question I have is how did you use your three sources? Did the sources all say that one little snipet of information about this God? I think that it totally is an interesting topic and it must've been hard to choose and do research for. You have a very good bibliography, it is well organized and easy to read.At the end of your body the last two sentences could just be combined into one, the two sentences feel choppy and not well written. all of the content on the page is current knowledge I do wish there was more of it. I feel like if this was the only information out there about your topic another topic should've been an option possibly? You did add a few things to the article that were not there before which i commend you for because I assume it was a difficult thing to do with how little information there is about your topic from reliable sources.