User:Berserkz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Berserk_(manga)?action=edit

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because have an interest in this particular manga and have read it before. It is important to have this article to explain the story and its contents as well as the creators backstory to inform readers better the history of this manga. After reviewing this article, it has a lot of information regarding the story and creators background but could use some improvements.

Evaluate the article
The lead section has good information but could be condensed to help the reader stay engaged on the articles subject. The content could use some improvements. There is a lot of unnecessary information and could be some sentences could be more simplified .The tone and balance of the article are good, no bias is seen and very neutral. There are a lot of sources and references throughout the article but I did see on the talk page that some were fixed which leads me to believe more need attention and correction if needed. Writing quality is good but could be simplified in a lot of areas to be more precise and clear. This article could use some more imagery and media to help readers follow the plot and description. It is also listed as a C-class article and is apart of three wikiprojects. The talk page has useful edit suggestions and corrected information. My overall impression is that this article needs some improvement, while it has a lot of information it should be condensed and simplified for the readers. The plot needs improvements and imagery but overall this article is well developed.