User:BertoHContreras/DNA end resection/Bpalanisamy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Humberto Contreras


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BertoHContreras/DNA_end_resection?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * DNA end resection

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Introduction
I really like your description of what DNA end resection is. Perhaps including a picture or gif of the degradation activity would be nice. Also what does DSB stand for?

Background
I like how you gave the three categories of repair. I didn't understand the part about the "two strands are linked at the point of the double-strand break are even worse,". I think a picture explaining this would be nice.

Can DSBs occur due to UV radiation? What are some real life examples of DSB breaks

Mechanism
I think you should link the cell cycle wikipedia article. I think picture showing the two mechanism would be nice. (I don't have a too much a depth knowledge of biology so this seems complicated to me, but to other readers this may be fine)

Resection of Telomere DSBs
No comments for this section. I think this is awesome!

Resection of Mitotic DSBs
"recruited by the to DNA ends" might be a typo?

I think pictures describiing this steps would be nice

Overall I don't think there is much to change in your wiki article. I think you should include pictures so that the readers can understand some of the processes that you describe in your text. I think you may need to simply the language such that a lay person can understand it but that might be because I'm not famililar with bio.