User:BestofLAandBay/Economy of Argentina/Jumanaabdelgadir Peer Review

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BestofLAandBay


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Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead

- There are no documented changes to the lead. May not be needed, as the lead already references agricultural sector of the country.

Content

- Relevant content

- Up to date, and has information/statistics from the past five years

- All content belongs

- Addresses perspective of workers, which is a historically erased/underrepresented perspective

Tone

- Neutral and conveys facts

- Not biased, most of the information is cited facts

- underrepresented viewpoints

- not persuasive, which is perfect for Wikipedia

Sources and References

- Not all information is backed up my a clear citation, mainly the claims feel uncited. I would add many more citations and at the same time condense the added information so it is less like prose.

- Statistics reflect what sources say

- Maybe update information with sources from post-2018

- Sources that are selected are good

- Try linking academic papers/journals/articles/sources directly from references list, because I cannot access them without googling them on my own

Organization

- Content is well written, but there are a few grammatical erros/spelling errors, and there are some references to you as the author. "My secondary source...", for example. I would erase that and double check that style of writing.

- Overall organization is good, and new sub-heading is perfect for your section

Overall

- Definitely more concrete, and additions improves article by elaborating on an important sector

- Relevant information

- Overall improvements: add citations and edit prose to reflect style of writing on Wikipedia