User:Betam25/Scarus niger/Sofiiahe00 Peer Review

Scarus Niger

Introduction

Often live in solitude and males… that sentence might be better for the reproduction section

Talk a little about the phylum, class, etc. It would be nice to have that in the intro

Move reproduction section to the reproduction

Reproduction

Add some more images (maybe the reproductive organs in the paper)

This section on the paper, it says that the results are theoretically true, and more research is needed. We think that maybe it would be good to add that it´s unsure or maybe expand a little but more

The paper talks about the 5 maturity stages. Maybe mention that as well?

Also add that the fish is oviparous (it´s in the paper Page 1)

It seems that there is a lot info from the article that can be add onto this section

Feeding

98.9 what??

Add a link to acetate if possible, for other people to understand

Ecology

The last sentence would be nice to have as an introduction for the ecology section. We think that it would read better as the first sentence and go into the topic

Distribution

Maybe add a picture of where they are found?

Also expand a little bit more if possible

We think that it feel a little weird that it is only one sentence. We were thinking that maybe it can be added to the general section where it talks about their location or expand on it a little bit?

If so, we think that it would read better if the section is placed after the general section before reproduction

Comments

We thought that it was really interesting but a little brief, we would love to read more about them!:)

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