User:BethC244./The American Eugenics Society/Huntermd33 Peer Review

What part of the gov't funded society?

-"statistics" spelled incorrectly as "statics" at end of first paragraph

Could you maybe add links to wikipedia pages/websites for the founders?

-"a capable, desirable __" missing child in second to last sentence of third paragraph

-Second to last paragraph opening sentence is kind of confusing

-thank all the other states combined*, third to last sentence in second to last paragraph

-could you expand maybe on if their distancing themselves from the AES is factually supported by their objectives/goals? (last paragraph)

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BethC244


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BethC244./The_American_Eugenics_Society?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Society for Biodemography and Social Biology

Evaluate the drafted changes
What part of the gov't funded society?

-"statistics" spelled incorrectly as "statics" at end of first paragraph

Could you maybe add links to wikipedia pages/websites for the founders?

-"a capable, desirable __" missing child in second to last sentence of third paragraph

-Second to last paragraph opening sentence is kind of confusing

-thank all the other states combined*, third to last sentence in second to last paragraph

-could you expand maybe on if their distancing themselves from the AES is factually supported by their objectives/goals? (last paragraph)