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Article evaluation

I evaluated thearticle “retinitis pigmentosa” for this assignment. The purpose of this article is to give facts about RP.

There are no biased opinions that I could detect, but an article that has the intention of giving facts doesn’t have much room for biased opinions, unless you start talking about treatments.

The citations I spcheched seemed legit, one didn’t work as the websit moved.

RP isn’t really a topic that is talked about much, some of the information may have been older, but symptoms don’t usually change much.

Most of the conversations going on in the talk page were about possible additions that weren’t added and minor editing like an updated image.

This article is not a part of any wiki projects that I could see

This article takes a more acedemic tone, while in class, we take a slightly more relaxed tone.

A possible article edit:

One article I might consider editing would be the WindowEyes article. While it does give information on the bare basics of this screen reader, it doesn’t give information about why it was discontinued or what the program designers did so that the WindowEyes users ouldn’t be left hig and dry wen the program was discontinued.