User:Bethstfrancis/Narcissus triandrus/JoJo-74r68h Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bethstfrancis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bethstfrancis/Narcissus_triandrus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Narcissus triandrus
 * Narcissus triandrus

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I think, overall your article is well written, has good flow, and is straightforward. The only problems I see are in article are citations after certain facts and clickable links to specific words.  Also there were minor grammar errors, but I feel that's understandable, it's a rough draft, everyone has them.
 * I also feel your content could be combined somehow to the original. Your facts focus on different aspects of the plant and almost the same can be said of the original article.  But either way, it's all good, it's your article.

'''Sentences with grammar issues listed below. Underline & or bold words indicate correction.'''


 * These flowers are concolorous, are supported by a waxy tubulous stem, and decorated with broad flat leaves, similar to its mother plant the Narcissus, or the Daffodil. (removed the extra word and, too repetitive)
 * The Narcissus triandrus is known to have its flower point downwards, showcasing a pendant orientation. Along with this, the plant is also an example of inflorescence, truly having hundreds of flowers inside the head of the plant, instead of just one.
 * Leaf: The leaves of the Narcissus triandrus are broad and near-vertical in direction.