User:Bethstrutz/sandbox

Article Draft: Sarah Loguen Fraser
I created a separate sandbox for my article draft, located here.

Article Evaluation: The Twilight Zone Tower of Terror

 * Overall, the article is very well detailed and cited.
 * The description of some details, particularly the queue of the California Adventure attraction, read more emotionally and less objectively, which is noted in a banner over the section.
 * The section of the article dedicated to the Disneyland Paris version of the ride is significantly shorter than the rest of the parks' descriptions.
 * The article appears fairly neutrally. Particularly since there are no controversies associated with the ride, all of the details about the rides appearance, function, and features are presented clearly without much room for opinion.
 * All of the links from the citations that I checked worked. Since most of the sources related to theme park rides aren't usually academic, the majority of them are from popular sources (particularly local or trade papers), but they seem reputable and unbiased.
 * There is some interesting discussion in the talk page about whether or not public "outrage" about changed to the ride should be included. Since this kind of response to Disney ride changes is typical, the users seem to agree that this shouldn't be included.
 * It's a part of WikiProject Disney

Sarah Loguen Fraser
Sarah Loguen Fraser was a black physician and pediatrician in the late 1800s/early 1900s, who was believed to be the fourth African American woman to become a licensed physician in the U.S. There is very little information on her page, and no subheadings or division of the information at all. Like many of the articles we looked at as a class, there is a focus on her struggles rather than her accomplishments. As of now, there are exactly 500 words in the article and 4 total sources, so expansion would be extremely beneficial.

Cynthia Gomez
Cynthia Gomez is a Latina psychologist, who founded the Health Equity Institute in San Francisco, was on multiple presidential advisory committees for HIV/AIDS, and is a major advocate for public health in marginalized groups (particularly in regards to sexuality/gender). Her page currently has only 323 words, no pictures, and 5 sources. Given her accomplishments and activism, there is much more that could be added to her article, and increasing it by five-fold seems very feasible.

Norma Ford Walker
Norma Ford Walker was one of the major pioneers of medical genetics. She was a renowned expert is many fields, including multiple births and invertebrate zoology, however, her page currently only has one section: "Life and work." It has 381 words and only one picture. She is clearly a notable figure in modern medicine, however, her page clearly needs some development.

The Trevor Project
The Trevor Project is a major national project, relating to mental health and suicide prevention for LGBTQ youth. It's the primary hotline and resource provided for struggling LGBTQ youth in the U.S., and has major impacts nationwide, but is relatively small. The page overall has multiple sections, but its descriptions are fairly basic and could use much more expansion. Looking at the talk page, much of the concern surrounding the page relates to it potentially reading as a promotion or advertisement, which could easily be adjusted with edits to writing and the addition of more sources.