User:Beweisbard/Ndidi Dike/Sophialombardi Peer Review

General info
Beweisbard
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Ndidi Dike
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ndidi Dike

Evaluate the drafted changes
The restructuring of the article was well done though I think the additionally paragraph about her exhibit in 2023 could be later in the exhibitions section so the read can follow the information chronologically. That being said, the content is very up to date, relevant, detailed, and addresses an equity gap regarding African women artists and writers. The information regarding her recent exhibition is incredibly significant and drastically improves the article. There are a couple of grammatical errors throughout the article but that is an easy fix. Another area of improvement could be a section about her book since it is currently encompassed under the exhibition section.