User:Bflx 11/Alphonzo Terrell/Aliciab5334 Peer Review

Anthonyn256
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Article Strengths

 * 1) Cohesion/ Continuity
 * 2) Organized Formatting
 * 3) Neutral Language and content
 * 4) Fact-based articles
 * 5) Great sentence structure

Areas of opportunity
None

Overall
In all, it is a well-written article that has many components that blend effortlessly together as a complete thought. The array of fact-based sources makes this an enjoyable read. I can only say how much this article has inspired me to continue to make further edits. I hope that I can continue to learn much from your team.