User:Bflx 11/Alphonzo Terrell/Michael248 Peer Review

General info
Michael248
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Anthonyn256/Alphonzo Terrell
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * I just look at my peer's article, so I don't think see any updates from him/her.
 * This article is about Alphonzo Terrell who was a co-founder and a CEO of his own company Spill. He use to work in digital and social marketing for companies. He had a clear introduction sentence and briefly describe this article.
 * My peer includes summary, college life, career, and awards & nominations.
 * I don't think the Lead has information that is not present in this article.


 * This article is concise, the peer made this article a good brief sentence on each of the sections. The article was well organized, so I wouldn't be too much information.

Content


 * The content is relevant to the topic is the summary of the person that the peer made an article.
 * The content is not up-to-date.
 * I don't see anything this is missing or something that don't belong.

The article deal with Alphonzo that he was let go in November 4, 2022 and he motivate himself to not give up and keep following his dreams. It addresses that he works in Twitter's global and worked here for 3 years during his career until November.

Tone and Balance


 * The content is added neutral because it's not positive or negative, but it's something that it is ok.
 * I'm not sure if the claims are heavily biased, but some of the claims are medium to me. Alophonzo wants to be a basketball in college until decided to be a president of a student funded record known as CU records.
 * I this article is underrepresented because, the article needs a little more exciting information that caught people's attention about Alophonzo.
 * I'm not sure about the content added attempt to persuade them in one position or away from another.

Sources and Reference


 * I think all new content backed up a reliable recourses, because the article reference the source of the information.
 * The sources mentions the Spill app that Alophonzo create.
 * The Sources are thorough and reflect the available literature of the topic, it mainly mention about Sill app.