User:Bflx 11/Alphonzo Terrell/Oofin245 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?Anthonyn256, Jaydenc2507, MachInX19, N01anV
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Anthonyn256/Alphonzo Terrell
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the info in the article seems to be good but the biggest problem I feel is the grammar. The sentences they wrote feel too short and could be combined to make the article more reader-friendly. There are also a couple of spelling mistakes like using artists instead of artists. The sources seem to be good at a glance and I think that the organization of the article is good.