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 * 1) What I have changed from the previous submission  is that in terms of citation I removed the red underlines errors. In addition I provided a table of contents example that mimics the content in other Women Health articles. I also divided up some sections as i was advised to do so.
 * 2) Put your revised material next.

Final Draft SFD-

Lead Section: the lead section is writing before the table of contents and the heading.some of the characteristics and components of good Wikipedia lead section will include giving the basics, simple and not too long. It should be no more than four well-composed paragraphs, about 300-500 words like articles such as ,Ovarian drilling, Birth control, and Female genital mutilation. It must have a neutral point of view, establishes the context, summarizes main points and hints what's about to come. It should also include an info-box (summary information), citation within the lead section, include prominent controversies. The question we should be asking is does it summarize the article and topic?

Table of Contents: this is where the different section headings are used. The headings should be numbered and found within HTML tags just as mentioned in Manual:Table of contents.in addition, the table of contents lists the headings in almost always a chronological order. For example, in Women’s Health, the table of contents allows readers to first read the different kinds signs and symptoms, the diagnosis, prevention, treatment, prognosis, epidemiology, and it then goes in detail about its effects, then its prevalence and history. Later on, it leads to its effects in society and culture and introducing further leading like the HIV/AIDS and Birth Control articles. As an example of this from the Birth Control article, this is the following table of contents->

Contents


 * 1Methods
 * 1.1Hormonal
 * 1.2Barrier
 * 1.3Intrauterine devices
 * 1.4Sterilization
 * 1.5Behavioral
 * 1.6Emergency
 * 1.7Dual protection
 * 2Effects
 * 2.1Health
 * 2.2Finances
 * 3Prevalence
 * 4History
 * 4.1Early history
 * 4.2Birth control movement
 * 4.3Modern methods
 * 5Society and culture
 * 5.1Legal positions
 * 5.2Religious views
 * 5.3World Contraception Day
 * 5.4Misconceptions
 * 6Research directions
 * 6.1Females
 * 6.2Males
 * 7Other animals
 * 8References
 * 9Further reading
 * 10External links

Sub-Section: once you write the lead section, you go into more detail in each separate section. This should be written in a professional matter, not including any bias views. It should include well grounded in data, be simple, and easy to follow. The word choice and tone should also appropriate for the article, in this case for a Women’s Health category it should include health content and medical analysis. It should be well written as it focuses on the central idea but introduces other health-related article topics within.

Lastly, it should have excellent spelling, grammar, and punctuation. The article should include media meaning images, maps, graphs and more allowing readers to visually understand the topic. In the Birth Control article 15 images allow us to distinguish the different types of birth control, maps allow us to see reports on maternal mortality rate, and tables/graphs allow us to learn about the chance of pregnancy during the first year of use and the fertility rate by region.On top of that, the article should be written in a neutral point of view giving detail about the method/topic and not include any bias believes although it presents legal positions, religious views, and even misconceptions.

Citation: the article should be supported by inline citation. A good article from the category of women health should include more than 200 references. The article should present high-quality sources for its work such as the World Health Organization Department of Reproductive Health and Research (2011), The Johns Hopkins manual of gynecology, etc. like in the Birth Control article. It uses facts and research that has already been provided before in a professional manner. Try to use academic and peer reviewed sources for accuracy. This includes University-level textbooks, Books published by respected publishing houses, Magazines, Journals and Mainstream newspapers.

The article should include formatted inline citations in areas where readers can do further research on a related topic. Citations are constantly used throughout the article and spread out in an evenly matter which can later be referred to in the References section at the bottom of the article or the bibliography sections making it easer for readers to find the exact sources you have used.

Word Count: without the reference section, a good article from the category of Women Health should have between 5,000-10,000 words, as seen in Birth Control, HIV/AIDS, and Female Genital Mutilation. Articles more on body parts such as Uterus, Ovaries and etc. tend to have a lower word count but include more media including images of anatomy, graphs of statics and more.

3. Finally, leave your previous versions below.

Rough Draft SFD-

Lead Section: the lead section is writing before the table of contents and the heading.some of the characteristics and components of good Wikipedia lead section will include giving the basics, simple and not too long. It should be no more than four well-composed paragraphs, about 300-500 words like articles such as ,Ovarian drilling, Birth control, and Female genital mutilation. It must have a neutral point of view, establishes the context, summarizes main points and hints what's about to come. It should also include an info-box (summary information), citation within the lead section, include prominent controversies. The question we should be asking is does it summarize the article and topic?

Table of Contents: this is where the different section headings are used. The headings should be numbered and found within HTML tags just as mentioned in Manual:Table of contents.in addition, the table of contents lists the headings in almost always a chronological order. For example, in Women’s Health, the table of contents allows readers to first read the different kinds signs and symptoms, the diagnosis, prevention, treatment, prognosis, epidemiology, and it then goes in detail about its effects, then its prevalence and history. Later on, it leads to its effects in society and culture and introducing further leading like the HIV/AIDS and Birth Control articles.

Sub-Section: once you write the lead section, you go into more detail in each separate section. This should be written in a professional matter, not including any bias views. It should include well grounded in data, be simple, and easy to follow. The word choice and tone should also appropriate for the article, in this case for a Women’s Health category it should include health content and medical analysis. It should be well written as it focuses on the central idea but introduces other health-related article topics within. Lastly, it should have excellent spelling, grammar, and punctuation. The article should include media meaning images, maps, graphs and more allowing readers to visually understand the topic. In the Birth Control article 15 images allow us to distinguish the different types of birth control, maps allow us to see reports on maternal mortality rate, and tables/graphs allow us to learn about the chance of pregnancy during the first year of use and the fertility rate by region.On top of that, the article should be written in a neutral point of view giving detail about the method/topic and not include any bias believes although it presents legal positions, religious views, and even misconceptions.

Citation: the article should be supported by inline citation. A good article from the category of women health should include more than 200 references. The article should present high-quality sources for its work such as the World Health Organization Department of Reproductive Health and Research (2011), The Johns Hopkins manual of gynecology, etc. like in the Birth Control article. It uses facts and research that has already been provided before in a professional manner. Try to use academic and peer reviewed sources for accuracy. This includes University-level textbooks, Books published by respected publishing houses, Magazines, Journals and Mainstream newspapersThe article should include formatted inline citations in areas where readers can do further research on a related topic. Citations are constantly used throughout the article and spread out in an evenly matter which can later be referred to in the References section at the bottom of the article.

Word Count: without the reference section, a good article from the category of Women Health should have between 5,000-10,000 words, as seen in Birth Control, HIV/AIDS, and Female Genital Mutilation. Articles more on body parts such as Uterus, Ovaries and etc. tend to have a lower word count but include more media including images of anatomy, graphs of statics and more.

Lead Section Edit #1: Lil Baby

Current:

Dominique Jones, (born December 3, 1994) known professionally as Lil Baby, is an American rapper from Atlanta, Georgia. He is best known for his songs "Freestyle", "Yes Indeed" and "Drip Too Hard", the latter two peaking at number 6 and 4 respectively on the Billboard Hot 100 chart.

Edited:

Dominique Jones, (born December 3, 1994) known professionally as Lil Baby, is an American rapper from Atlanta, Georgia. He is best known for his songs "Freestyle", "Yes Indeed" and "Drip Too Hard", the latter two peaking at number 6 and 4 respectively on the Billboard Hot 100 chart.

After being incarcerated for 2 years for a probation violation in 2015, Lil baby begins his music carrer. Lil baby goes about his rap career after releasing an album known as Perfect Timing in April of 2017 featuring Lil Yachty, Young Thug and Gunna. The music was produced in collaboration with Brickz and 808 Mafia. He continued to work on new music releasing singles such as "My Dawg" coming out with "Harder Than Hard" in 2017, "2 the Hard Way " (2017), "Too Hard ", and "Harder Than Ever " in 2018. His new work featured appearances from Drake, Offset , Lil Uzi Ver t , and more. This album entered the Billboard 200 album chart at number Three.

Lil baby was good friends with Quality Control Musics founders Pierre "Pee" Thomas and Kevin "Coach K" Lee. In addition, he was affiliated with the 4 Pockets Full clique. Atlanta rapper Lil Baby ended 2018 with a new project "Street Gossip " in November featuring Meek Mill, Gucci Mane, Offset , 2 Chainz, Rylo Rodriguez, and Nocap produced by Quality Control Music , Motown , Capitol Records and Wolfpack Music Group.