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May 19 Communist Organization:

1. Principles

2. Objectives

3. Activities

4. Arrests

5. See also

6. Citations

Principles:


 * 1) They believe that the biggest struggle in the world today is the struggle between national liberation struggles and and US led imperialism.
 * 2) The United states is an empire that holds many different nations that want to be free.
 * 3) They are committed to the Third World Leadership.
 * 4) Armed struggle is a fundamental tool.
 * 5) Women's liberation is a key component in the fight against imperialism
 * 6) All white people are privileged.
 * 7) They deny revisionism because it does not support armed struggle.
 * 8) They are revolutionaries dedicated to the downfall of US led imperialism

Principles of Unity of the May 19th Communist Organization. The Organization.

Activities:

The May 19 Communist Organization is a support group for national liberation movements engaged in armed struggle against imperialism. this group actively promoted domestic terrorism in the united states. they helped other national liberation groups in their movements such as the struggle against lesbian oppression and the struggle against white supremacy.

GlobalSecurity.org. “Military.” May 19th Communist Organization (M19CO), www.globalsecurity.org/military/world/para/m19co.htm.


 * Comments****

Hi, Bgwaldi! I got your article to review.

First, I really like that you included the principles of the May 19 Communist Organization. It's an important part of who they are and why they do what they do, so it's vital to a well-rounded article. When you move the information to the actual page, you might want to go back and revise the beginnings of all of the bullet points so that they are consistent: Either say "they believe that..." or make each one a statement of fact, with a note that this is what they believe. Otherwise it seems slightly biased.

I really like that you got the principles from their manifesto. That is a very accurate source for what they believe.

At first I thought you might need more information on what exactly the May 19 Communist Organization is (besides the obvious) but it seems like the original article has that covered.

Your grammar and spelling are good for the most part. You have a few places where you seem to have typos--in the last paragraph it should be either "engaged in an armed struggle" or "engaged in armed struggles." Probably the latter; it makes more sense. You also need to remember to capitalize the letters at the beginnings of your sentences, but I figure you'll do that when you move it to the actual article. Also capitalize "United States."

I did notice that you have only two citations. You might want to consider digging for more info so that your article is less slanted and more informative. The last paragraph you have here could use some more details. You make me curious; what does it mean that they "help" other national liberation groups? If you can clarify that, it might be a good idea.

Altogether, this is a really good start, and has some really good contributions to the article. I look forward to seeing it all put together.

Good luck! SgaEtari (talk) 05:56, 30 April 2019 (UTC)