User:Bh0217/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Stockton, California


 * Article Evaluation
 * All of the content in the article is properly done (relevant content, neutral perspective, several citations). However, there are parts that are noted to need revisions with more updated information and more citations. The main aspect that I find to be missing is the lack of information about redlining in Stockton, since it is a large part of the city's identity.


 * Sources
 * https://academic.oup.com/cjres/article-abstract/13/2/381/5894244
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2542519619302414

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Chloramination


 * Article Evaluation
 * All of the content in the article is relevant to the topic, and throughout the article it remains neutral. It is noted that there needs to be more citations, but overall, every other area to go over during evaluation is properly done in the article. However, one possible topic that could be added is the public reaction toward chloramines, specifically in the California central valley or Stockton, but because the location is quite specific, it may be necessary to create a new article altogether.


 * Sources
 * https://0-discovery.ebsco.com.pacificatclassic.pacific.edu/c/sephqk/details/pmknqbwkuv?q=stockton%20chloramine
 * https://0-discovery.ebsco.com.pacificatclassic.pacific.edu/c/sephqk/details/z5qxas7lq5?q=stockton%20chloramine

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Pesticide Incidents in the Central Valley


 * Article Evaluation
 * The only article about pesticide incidents in California is "Pesticide Incidents in the San Joaquin Valley", but there is nothing on the Central Valley as a whole. The article should contain various incidents, their causes, and the effects on either the population or the environment.


 * Sources
 * https://0-discovery.ebsco.com.pacificatclassic.pacific.edu/c/sephqk/details/bqw2eu4dn5?q=Central%20Valley%20pesticide%20incidents
 * https://europepmc.org/article/med/3291386