User:Bh0217/Stockton, California/PAPRI01 Peer Review

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Bh0217 (Bowie He)


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 * User:Bh0217/Stockton, California

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The lead is clear, goes straight to the point of what he will be examining and a brief explanation of what it is (redlining). The content is related to the topic because it is the effect of redlining in a city within the San Joaquin Valley. A bit overly detailed but with good details, the extra details should follow and present as a new idea! The content is up to date and has useful information on current issues ongoing in this community. Yes it deals with Wikipedia’s equity gap because it is addressing those redlined communities. The content is neutral and fact based. No heavily biased opinions or any opinions in that matter it is neutral/ no positions are favored. Yes the content is backed up by reliable sources, Scientifically based ones and informational ones that are not bias. Yes, all sources are up to date and the oldest are dated back two years. The links work and the sources he chose were great for this topic! Content is clear to read, there are a few grammatical errors. No images were added.