User:Bherrin3/William Pulgram/Mmillerk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bherrin3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * William Pulgram
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * William Pulgram

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This Wikipedia page seemed to have good information, however I would have liked to see some pictures. There seemed to be a lot of information which I found to be a bit overwhelming without a break up of images.

I would also like to learn more about his personal life and how that affected his work. especially since he was a Holocaust survivor.

The conclusion seemed a bit short and I would've liked a more full summary about him and his work. Clean and concise overview would be helpful to really understand this page