User:Bhuggins2/Evolution of the Vitamin D Receptor/Joeadunlap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bhuggins2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Evolution of the vitamin D receptor


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Evolution of the vitamin D receptor

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section is very well written, succinct, and ties in with the article.The organization and structure are good. Tone is neutral. The article flows well which allows for an easy read of the in depth but balanced in coverage information. No issues with grammar/spelling were noticed. I would suggest adding images if possible as I think that would add the finishing polish to this. Good job!