User:Bhuggins2/Evolution of the Vitamin D Receptor/Sportsphreak73 Peer Review

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(Bhuggins2)


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 * Evolution of the vitamin D receptor
 * Evolution of the vitamin D receptor

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I know this maybe silly, but I would like to know how many millions of years ago, approximately when do they have proof of this receptor or a precursor in the sea lamprey was found, I felt like it would be nice in the lead sentence. I thought you did a great job expressing how important Vitamin D and its receptor are to the function of life in almost all vertebrates. All the links I clicked on worked perfectly. The first section of the Nuclear Receptors section did feel a bit out of sync, or in some way could be described as distracting. Maybe it is just so thick with information, and there may be nothing that can be changed. I think you did a good job showing that some of this information doesn’t have experimental confirmation, so I didn’t feel any strong bias when reading your article or in the links provided.