User:Biancamsalgado/Sunnyside High School (Sunnyside, Washington)/JasmineNJ Peer Review

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Biancamsalgado
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 * In the introduction, Bianca could elaborate more on the school's academic excellence awards that they have received and contribute by adding a date/ name of the award.
 * Update or add the graduation rate for 2023-2024 and maybe research as to why the graduation rate went down, maybe it could be because of the economy, no resources, etc.
 * Add a section about the extracurricular activities and if any sports accomplishments or club accomplishments that the school won, you can add that too.