User:Bibaschh/Green vehicle/Bxwalsh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bibaschh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bibaschh/Green_vehicle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green vehicle

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel that the lead saying that these cars are, "Good for the economy" sounds opinionated. I feel that it would be best to remove this if you do not specific data to back up this claim. In the body, you say, "Compressed air vehicles (CAV) is powered by air engine using compressed air stored in the tank." There are quite a few grammatical errors in this sentence. Instead, you should use the word "are" instead of "is" because what you are talking about (CAVs) is plural. I would also insert "an" after by, so you have, "...Powered by an air engine". Later in the article, you incorrectly refer to these vehicles as "CVA". In the final portion of the body, you say that these vehicles are, "Cheap and efficient" which I feel is not only vague, but incorrect. Have you looked at the prices of these vehicles compared to the typical combustion engine vehicle? If not, then I would probably either find a source to back up that claim, or omit that portion entirely. For your sources, you only appear to have used one, which does not work at all. When I access the link, it brings me to a random search engine with no content whatsoever.