User:Bibaschh/Green vehicle/Hmerzai Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bibaschh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bibaschh/Green vehicle


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green vehicle

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section of the article is easily understandable and descriptive. The overall tone of the article is very neutral. The content of the article is up to date. The grammatical and sentence sequence seems perfect. The photos shared seems relevant. The reference links all are ok and works well. There are no copyright issues. The sources he gathered in his bibliography are reliable and links are working great. The overall shape of his bibliography looks very organized. His sandbox is also organized well. The section he is intending to add to the paragraph is easily noticable. The reference given is accurate and the link works too.