User:Bibaschh/Green vehicle/TylerMay12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bibaschh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green vehicle

Evaluate the drafted changes
With the given lead I guess I can kinda understand what the paragraph will be about but it should be shorter more broad and right ti the point. Also, I don't think you should use "good" in your lead because that seems unprofessional. Also, if you are making your own new section in the article I believe that you should use more than one source to provide your facts and the information that you used for that section you added. Also, the link you provided for the information doesn't even work so thats really bad. Lastly, I feel that there was a lack of evidence to support your added section with sources.