User:Big.Empty.Space/Sindri (mythology)/Grinch Feet Peer Review

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You did a great job wiht your article about Sindri. Your conent that you added is neautral and very in depth regarding Sindri and his mythlogy. I dont think any point you made about Sindri was overrepresentated or underrepresentated. The way you described him as a dwarf and added the fact that he may go by another name was a nice touch. Being really in depth with this myth really helped me as a new reader to Sindri, understand him and his story. All of your information is backed up by quality sources as well. Your layout of your addition is really pleasing to read, its clear and easy to read. All of the information is easily accessible and well spaced so I dont feel overwhelmed. With your additon to Sindri I really believe that this is a compelete article. You have described him erfectly tothe point where if a new reader were to look up Sindri and read your article they would understnad more about him with ease.