User:BigAndLarge/Show Me the Body/Mg6384nyu Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing? Dan and Charlie

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 * Show Me the Body


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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) I think the information if complete in terms of discography and dates. Though, the page is kind of still scarce. I think if you can find the background of how the band came to be that would be a neutral description of the band. Maybe also adding the monthly listeners and popularity. Photos of albums and band members would also be nice. Though I think for now the organization is very clear and separated so there is no confusion. The article has the sources needed but not the sentences of sources in their paper.