User:BigToe42/Bioremediation/Sweendog8 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?BigToe42/Bioremediation
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:BigToe42/Bioremediation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Bioremediation

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See if you can add some info about bio accumulation of pesticides and how that lead to threats due to breakdown resistance in the environment and what that may mean for bio remediation.:May be out of scope for the topic. What types of bio remediation work for pesticide clean up? Is there a time frame for when bio remediation is most effective?

What ultimately determines which type of bioremediation method to use is the type of pollutant being delt with, the depth of the pollution, as well as the surrounding environment.:: I would reword this sentence. "The type of pollutant ultimately...".