User:Big Daddy Lava Tornado/1999 Luzon earthquake/Bullpenboys19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Big Daddy Lava Tornado/1999 Luzon earthquake


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Big%20Daddy%20Lava%20Tornado/1999_Luzon_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1999 Luzon earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Try to have more than just impact to add. Consider possibly the context to the earthquake (were there any other before or after which are thought to be linked, previous or predicted activity along the fault region, etc) and since the class is also about the human response say what was similar or different on how people/government reacted that impacted what is in your impact section. The jellyfish scapegoat is quite funny and I am curious to hear more about it. That might be a good opportunity, while remaining unbiased, to comment on the Philippine government and how they have been good or bad in general in reacting/preparing for natural disasters.

You have plenty of good prompts for your impact section!

It is still fairly early so you do not need straight up paragraphs but you do not have a whole lot of information/sources which will hinder your ability to develop the article. There is not a whole lot I can say to help improve the article because I just have a series of prompts and the most baseline information.