User:Big Daddy Lava Tornado/1999 Luzon earthquake/John.heuver Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft looks very promising, with some confusing formatting. I see you listed the questions you were answering and assume they will be removed for the final draft. All of the information was relevant and important to the topic, which made for a good draft. I thought the article was good at being neutral as it included points of view without stating certain ones as right or wrong. The facts are supported by 3 good sources whos links work well. These sources also appear to be reliable.