User:Big Daddy Lava Tornado/1999 Luzon earthquake/Kevinhwang1 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

1999 Luzon Earthquake


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Big Daddy Lava Tornado/1999 Luzon earthquake
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1999 Luzon earthquake

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content that is there looks good, however, there is not enough. Looking through the sandbox for things to add I also do not see enough. I like how the users have questions that would add substantial information to the article. Once those questions are answered I think you guys will be fine. I see questions in the sandbox that are good for a section in impact such as "How many lives were affected?" and "What was damage to landscape?". However, the other questions in the sandbox for the section Impact, I think you guys should start a new section called aftermath. In this section I would talk about the following years after the earthquake struck, how families have adjusted to the earthquake, and what they did to prepare for a large earthquake like this again. If possible I would throw in a picture as well of the current landscape and what happened to that landscape after the earthquake hit. Other than that everything looks good.