User:Bill hater/Androgyny/NorthShoreLoon Peer Review

General info
Bill hater
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bill hater/Androgyny
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Androgyny

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- In the first sentence maybe you can say how the possession of both masculine and feminine characteristics means that some androgynous people do not look distinctively male or female.

Content

- I like the inclusion of the difference between androgyny and intersex people, because it is an important distinction. As well as the difference between being trans and non-binary.

Sources and References

- I enjoyed all the different in-sentence links to other ideas/articles that this topic references. It makes it more well rounded.

Organization

- Organization is good and presents a good array of ideas and references in a way that makes sense

Images and Media

- I liked that you changed the image to make it a more diverse example.

Overall Impressions

I like it!