User:BillyWeitzman/be bold

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Nothing serious, solely interesting, but the first citation (found in the first paragraph) is an anthropologists argument against the existence of cannibalism. The essay is from 1979, published by Oxford Press, and he goes on to debate the existence of cannibalism in the Americas. The section labeled "reasons" begins going into the lawfulness of cannibalism, something that could be in a different section. Nothing seems to be argued in this article, it is only hard facts. Bias is not evident. Everything in the article is relevant to the topic, and the sources are all live and working. The sources, which are scholarly articles/publications, also appear to be relevant to the topic at hand. The article on cannibalism is rated as a B-class article, and is related to the WikiProjects of religion, death, and anthropology. Wikipedians interested in the topic have continued to better the article. Those on the talk page are discussing various topics that could be related to cannibalism, such as cases in the modern era and legality. They are also much more interested in the modern happenings of cannibalism than we are.

Great Migration of Canada Editing
The original sentences read as "As well, jobs that were previously done by poor peasants could now be done even more cheaply by machinery. This led to the loss of many jobs," and I didn't think that this read smoothly. I have decided to revise it so that it reads as "Jobs that were previously done by poor peasants could now be done even cheaper by machinery, and this led to the loss of many jobs."