User:Binclima811/Common raven physiology/Emeraldh01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Binclima811


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Common raven physiology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Common raven physiology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a great topic to write about! I think the amount of information you're adding into the article is great. I would maybe add some more into the introduction or "lead" part of the article. I would add some more background about the raven, you could possibly insert it after "...the most widely distributed of all corvids.", I think that giving some more background will help gather more understanding of their mechanisms! Also I would definitely add some photos! I think this is a really interesting topic and I'm excited to see the final!