User:Bio Neuro Student/Trumpeter swan/Bluup Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bio Neuro Student


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bio%20Neuro%20Student/Trumpeter_swan?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Trumpeter swan

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

I have read the article you are editing, "Trumpeter Swan".

I think many sections, such as the description, diet, and breeding sections contain plenty of useful details and .provides a good summary of the information available on this topic. The tone remains neutral throughout the article, and does not appear to be biased. The article is organized very well and split into clearly defined sections. The information contained in each section is relevant to the title of the section. The lead provides many good details about the trumpeter swan, however it could include some information about upcoming topics in the article. I think the habitat range of the bird would be useful to include in the lead. The article is very well written, the sentences flow together and the topics are well connected. There appear to be no spelling or grammatical errors.

All added content is relevant to the topic. The information added about the breeding behaviour of these swans provided greater understanding of the species and benefitted the article significantly. Providing the mating behaviour for both males and females was useful in understanding differences between the genders of the species. These sections were well written, unbiased, and contained different reliable sources throughout. The sources you used seem to be from reliable sources and are used equally throughout the paper. However, it may be useful to include additional sources. Some of the sources seem to be older, and some newer sources might benefit the article.

Overall, the article is very informative and provides an abundance of details on the given topic. I found the article interesting, and a great source for learning about trumpeter swans. Keep up the good work! ~