User:Bio phys 568/Membrane estrogen receptor/Aleahlani Peer Review

I think what you have going here is great! Obviously there is a whole bunch of information that you can add when the original article starts out so small, but I love the introduction that you have reworked; it flows nicely, it's very professionally written. I also think the subsections that you have created look fantastic and are well organized. Fleshing out the actual paragraphs before publication will be important, but I think you're looking great!

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