User:Biochem2024/Galactolysis/Hildegard Mascarpone Peer Review

General info
Biochem2024
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Galactolysis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Galactolysis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? - Yes, the lead was updated to reflect additional information to state that mutations in galactolytic enzyme causes disorders.

Content


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? -Yes, you added clarifying information about the formation of cataracts.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes, I see that the papers you used as your source are from 2003 and 2018.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? - No.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? - No, but it does clarify and add on to previously mentioned ideas, such as stating that cataracts are formed when the alternative pathway is used instead of the Leloir pathway.

Tone and Balance


 * Is the content added neutral? - Yes
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? - No

Sources and References


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? - The papers are reviews and are from reliable journals.


 * Are the sources thorough - Yes
 * Are the sources current? - Yes

Organization


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? - Yes, it is concise and clear.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? - There are no errors.

Overall impressions

- Hildegard Mascarpone
 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?/How can the content added be improved? - Yes, clarifying the causes of a disease associated with galactose metabolism improves the article.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? - The information builds on previous edits and is relevant.