User:Biochem51/Treponema pallidum/Chh38430 Peer Review

General info
Biochem51, Milliesmother, British Bird Boy, MargaretTulliver
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Biochem51/Treponema_pallidum?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Treponema pallidum

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think an explanation of TP0326 and TP0965 is needed. At least an brief introduction of these. Also the 0 in TP0965 is an uppercase O. I believe the culture section is well drafted and well written. All of the references look great.