User:Biochem51/Treponema pallidum/Pesce131 Peer Review

General info
Biochem51
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Biochem51/Treponema_pallidum?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Treponema pallidum

Evaluate the drafted changes
When reading the current version of the article, I noticed there wasn't a lot of information on the culture of Treponema pallidum. More information was included in the sandbox draft on culture and gave clear, updated information. However, it could be easier to understand from the point of view of someone who doesn't know a ton about bacteria.

The writers do a great job overall of giving updated information on subheadings that did not initially provide a ton of info.