User:BiologyBarbie/Thymus transplantation/Poisonpearl Peer Review

General info
BiologyBarbie
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BiologyBarbie/Thymus_transplantation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Thymus transplantation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Based off of the work you have completed thus far, you seem to be headed on the right track. This article topic and information is extremely interesting, with opportunities for additional information to be added. The references that you have added are credible and add to the content in this article. It doesn't seem like much has been added other than the additional references, so I would suggest going through one paragraph at a time and adding/editing. The work you have done is great and I am looking forward to reading more and seeing what else can be added to enhance this article! Great work!