User:Biology Brooke/Plant communication/Natoleon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Username: Biology Brooke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Biology Brooke/Plant communication


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Plant communication

Second peer review: unfortunately I don't see updates :(

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Looks like you have a good foundation from which to build your work. Looks like you have a great reference too, just need some more of course.