User:Bird flock/Computational chemistry/User19228 Peer Review

General info
Bird flock, Erdabravest2001
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bird flock/Computational chemistry
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Computational chemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The original article already had quite a bit of information, so good job at adding concise and important information.

- The information added is relevant to the topic and well written.

- Everything is organized in a clear and logical order.

- Avoid using "this" and "these" at the beginning of sentences.

- There are no hyperlinks incorporated throughout your draft. Should add hyperlinks to chemistry terms and terms relevant to the article that has not been defined.

- All the sources look good and current. Good use of numerous sources to support the article.

- Overall your have a very good start in improving the quality of the article.

Response To Peer Review - Bird Flock
Thank you for the evaluation of changes. We will be trying to reword the "this" and "these" parts of the sentence, and am glad there is a logical order to this.

Response To Peer Review - Erdabravest2001
"The original article already had quite a bit of information, so good job at adding concise and important information."

"The information added is relevant to the topic and well written."

"Everything is organized in a clear and logical order."

"All the sources look good and current. Good use of numerous sources to support the article."

"Overall your have a very good start in improving the quality of the article." Author Response: Thanks for this! Really Helpful feedback.

 'Avoid using "this" and "these" at the beginning of sentences.'  Author Response: We will strive for greater clarity regarding the use of "this" and "these" at the beginning of our sentences. The purpose of this adjustment was to show our neutral stance on the Wikipedia article. Thank you for those. "There are no hyperlinks incorporated throughout your draft. Should add hyperlinks to chemistry terms and terms relevant to the article that has not been defined."Author Response: We have added hyperlinks and are trying to update sources as we go.