User:Birdie2324/Split-brain/Cherry.Paint Peer Review

General info
(Birdie2324)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Birdie2324/Split-brain
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Not sure what this is

Evaluate the drafted changes
For starters, I love the pictures; they are informative and well done. The first area of concern I see is the large bold section at the top of the article describing a corpus callosotomy. Having large bolded sections like this is not typical for Wikipedia. Instead, I would suggest they make that section plain text and title it appropriately. My final suggestion would be to add at least one more reference. The memory section, in particular is lacks references.