User:Birdie2324/Split-brain/Strawberryshortcake10 Peer Review

General info
Sxndrx2828, PapiMan1, Addisonel, CHawks17
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Split-brain (computing)::Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):DNE

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Split-brain article is well thought out and explained beautifully. I'm not sure how you guys did it, but I appreciated the inclusion of wavering over certain highlighted words that would display the definition. This is extremely handy when it comes to fully understanding and grasping what is being talked about, especially when it's complicated topics such as this. I do think the group article is lacking pictures and a section that shows the history. Who discovered this? Why was is created etc? I would also like to mention, make sure your headings are properly labeled (capitalization), and watch out for run-on sentences! Great job.